Paper Boat


paper boat
drifting aimlessly


9 comments on “Paper Boat

  1. Bruce Ruston says:

    nice write reminds me of playing poo sticks

  2. Barbara says:

    Pretty much my memory of paper boats! Well done!

  3. elleceef says:

    I can picture it as it goes,,,,,,,

  4. ‘drifting aimlessly’….I loved this expression…..Beautiful haiku 🙂

    Life of paper boat

  5. vivinfrance says:

    A peaceful, truthful haiku.

  6. Awesome image you’ve painted with your words.

  7. So simple and so vivid.
    It will reach the sea, that’s the problem unless someone rescues it.

  8. so simple and so perfect!

  9. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    May I join the paper boat in its aimless drift?

    Paper Boat

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