Paper Boat

 
 
 


paper boat
 
drifting aimlessly
 
downriver

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9 comments on “Paper Boat

  1. Bruce Ruston says:

    nice write reminds me of playing poo sticks

  2. Barbara says:

    Pretty much my memory of paper boats! Well done!

  3. elleceef says:

    I can picture it as it goes,,,,,,,

  4. ‘drifting aimlessly’….I loved this expression…..Beautiful haiku 🙂

    Life of paper boat

  5. vivinfrance says:

    A peaceful, truthful haiku.

  6. Awesome image you’ve painted with your words.

  7. So simple and so vivid.
    It will reach the sea, that’s the problem unless someone rescues it.
    🙂

  8. so simple and so perfect!

  9. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    May I join the paper boat in its aimless drift?

    Paper Boat

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