waltzing up the stairs
unicorns with silver breath
singing me to sleep
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Bedtime
waltzing up the stairs
unicorns with silver breath
singing me to sleep
Mark M. Redfearn 
Outstanding!
Awesome! What a wonderfully composed haiku. Unicorns bringing you to sleep.
This is just magical. I love it.
sweet dreams are bound to be yours.
Unicorns with silver breath!! What a unique image that creates! Like!!
I love unicorns – what a wonderful picture you painted here. Delightful to me.
I enjoy picturing this, and in the picture, I am a child sitting up with delight rather than tucking myself in for fear of the monsters in the closet!
I’ll have one the same as he’s having!
so sweet!
How very magical!
I don’t even have the words to express how much I love this haiku Mark… thank you!
What a delightful taste of imagery you’ve evoked here – I really enjoyed it!
your haiku invites perfect dreaming.
A lullaby Haiku.. very nice
Silver breath…I can picture it! Great fantasy capture.
Lucky you ! Love this image.
Happy Friday !
Goodnight.
Peace upon you
Very mystical and inspiring haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)
What an amazing little image you have created with a handful of words!
Wilderness Waltz
With an escort like that, there is no doubt you got a good night’s sleep.