Bedtime

 
 
 


waltzing up the stairs
 
unicorns with silver breath
 
singing me to sleep

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20 comments on “Bedtime

  1. Awesome! What a wonderfully composed haiku. Unicorns bringing you to sleep.

  2. Patti says:

    This is just magical. I love it.

  3. vivinfrance says:

    sweet dreams are bound to be yours.

  4. Barbara says:

    Unicorns with silver breath!! What a unique image that creates! Like!!

  5. elleceef says:

    I love unicorns – what a wonderful picture you painted here. Delightful to me.

  6. Susan says:

    I enjoy picturing this, and in the picture, I am a child sitting up with delight rather than tucking myself in for fear of the monsters in the closet!

  7. I’ll have one the same as he’s having!

  8. Cathy says:

    How very magical!

  9. Lea says:

    I don’t even have the words to express how much I love this haiku Mark… thank you!

  10. What a delightful taste of imagery you’ve evoked here – I really enjoyed it!

  11. rebecca says:

    your haiku invites perfect dreaming.

  12. brudberg says:

    A lullaby Haiku.. very nice

  13. Poet Laundry says:

    Silver breath…I can picture it! Great fantasy capture.

  14. Kim Mailhot says:

    Lucky you ! Love this image.
    Happy Friday !

  15. Spadoman says:

    Goodnight.

    Peace upon you

  16. artmusedog says:

    Very mystical and inspiring haiku ~ (A Creative Harbor)

  17. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    What an amazing little image you have created with a handful of words!

    Wilderness Waltz

  18. annie says:

    With an escort like that, there is no doubt you got a good night’s sleep.

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