Shaking Free Sep29 by Mark M. Redfearn She takes up her flute and, piping a few thin notes, shakes free one small star. Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Battlefield Absent → 18 comments on “Shaking Free” Susan L Daniels says: September 29, 2012 at 11:58 am ooo–beautiful images here! Reply elleceef says: September 29, 2012 at 3:57 pm This is lovely. I love the flute and sometimes it does sound like it shakes free small stars. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: September 29, 2012 at 4:37 pm Nicely written. It was a joy to read your contributions to this month of writing haiku. Reply Barbara says: September 29, 2012 at 5:36 pm Oh… you saved the bet for last. Love the last line! Thanks for inspiration and comments! Reply Barbara says: September 29, 2012 at 5:37 pm Best Reply unfetteredbs says: September 29, 2012 at 6:40 pm how peaceful… love this. Reply sayantinibhattacharya says: September 29, 2012 at 11:02 pm lovely imageries:) Sayantini Bhattacharya http://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in Reply vivinfrance says: September 30, 2012 at 1:20 am What a lovely idea. Reply whistlingninja says: September 30, 2012 at 5:14 am a fantastic piece! Reply Karin Wiberg says: September 30, 2012 at 6:55 am That might be my favorite haiku of yours from the month. Very nice! Thank you! Reply sparklysilverstars says: September 30, 2012 at 8:50 am Beautiful imagination….Lovely haiku! Peace in prison Reply Patti says: September 30, 2012 at 6:30 pm Lovely, Mark. I’ve enjoyed reading your haiku and comments at my blog. Thank you! Reply odyzz says: October 1, 2012 at 9:35 am nice imagery… 🙂 Was under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge … Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS…being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull’s eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world…Loads of special thanks to each one of you…September had been very exciting and a learning month for me…I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure …Thanks a lot once again…keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly… Reply Teresa says: October 1, 2012 at 11:34 am Wonderful! I don’t think I ever managed to free a star when I played the flute. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 1, 2012 at 7:21 pm You can always pick it up and try again! 🙂 Reply Ellen Wilson says: October 4, 2012 at 4:53 am Lovely visual~ We all need to capture more stars, do the things that dazzle! 😀 Reply Sherry Blue Sky says: October 4, 2012 at 8:04 am Now THIS is SO beautiful. I had thought 30 words were just not enough – you proved me wrong. Reply Kathy Donlan says: October 4, 2012 at 3:36 pm I love this, so gentle and magestic at the same time. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.