She takes up her flute
and, piping a few thin notes,
shakes free one small star.
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Shaking Free
She takes up her flute
and, piping a few thin notes,
shakes free one small star.
Mark M. Redfearn 
ooo–beautiful images here!
This is lovely. I love the flute and sometimes it does sound like it shakes free small stars.
Nicely written. It was a joy to read your contributions to this month of writing haiku.
Oh… you saved the bet for last. Love the last line! Thanks for inspiration and comments!
Best
how peaceful… love this.
lovely imageries:)
Sayantini Bhattacharya
http://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in
What a lovely idea.
a fantastic piece!
That might be my favorite haiku of yours from the month. Very nice! Thank you!
Beautiful imagination….Lovely haiku!
Peace in prison
Lovely, Mark. I’ve enjoyed reading your haiku and comments at my blog. Thank you!
nice imagery… 🙂
Was under the clutches of Viral fever and I scribbled the last haiku within minutes ( I know its very very bad)I just wanted to complete this challenge …
Many thanks for being a part of this amazing journey of HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS…being a novice I tried to put in my best but I know at some or the other point I missed to hit the bull’s eye and still all of you all inspired me a lot either by peeping into my space or liking my posts and of course your ever encouraging comments made me feel on the top of the world…Loads of special thanks to each one of you…September had been very exciting and a learning month for me…I know I need to improvise a lot and I shall try to do that for sure …Thanks a lot once again…keep visiting and keep spilling your beans ..bouquets or brickbats all of them are accepted whole heartedly…
Wonderful! I don’t think I ever managed to free a star when I played the flute.
You can always pick it up and try again! 🙂
Lovely visual~
We all need to capture more stars, do the things that dazzle! 😀
Now THIS is SO beautiful. I had thought 30 words were just not enough – you proved me wrong.
I love this, so gentle and magestic at the same time.