Waterfall Oct1 by Mark M. Redfearn waterfall of words cascading over my heart wearing down the stone Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Absent Storm → 4 comments on “Waterfall” Lenore says: October 1, 2012 at 8:42 pm Mark, This is wonderful…I love the words. Lenore Reply Chevrefeuille says: October 1, 2012 at 11:41 pm Good day Mark, welcome to Carpe Diem, seize the day, my new daily haiku meme. Thank you for being part in this whole new adventure. What a wonderful haiku you’ve written on today’s prompt ‘waterfall’. I am excited about your second line ‘cascading over my heart’, really this is such a deep line. As I may say ‘I think you’re a haiku poet at heart who’s writing out of the heart. Thank you for sharing this with us … I hope to see you again here on Carpe Diem. Reply artmusedog says: October 2, 2012 at 6:35 am cascading over my heart (lovely wording) ~ excellent haiku many times heart feels like ‘stone’ numb from life ~ (A Creative Harbor) on blogger ~ thanks for coming by and commenting ~ Reply Mariya Koleva says: October 3, 2012 at 1:47 am great final line. I never thought of that angle. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.