4 comments on “Waterfall

  1. Lenore says:

    This is wonderful…I love the words.


  2. Good day Mark, welcome to Carpe Diem, seize the day, my new daily haiku meme. Thank you for being part in this whole new adventure.
    What a wonderful haiku you’ve written on today’s prompt ‘waterfall’. I am excited about your second line ‘cascading over my heart’, really this is such a deep line. As I may say ‘I think you’re a haiku poet at heart who’s writing out of the heart. Thank you for sharing this with us … I hope to see you again here on Carpe Diem.

  3. artmusedog says:

    cascading over my heart (lovely wording) ~ excellent haiku

    many times heart feels like ‘stone’ numb from life ~ (A Creative Harbor) on blogger ~ thanks for coming by and commenting ~

  4. great final line. I never thought of that angle.

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