Fragile Oct7 by Mark M. Redfearn Fragile little bird, trembling in my hand, will you find your way back home? Related Post navigation ← Scarlet Papers Phantom → 6 comments on “Fragile” Chevrefeuille says: October 7, 2012 at 4:07 am Wonderfully composed haiku (in Kanshicho-style 🙂 ). I like the imagery you have painted here. Thank you for being part in Carpe Diem. Reply Stephanie says: October 7, 2012 at 11:13 am This creates such a clear story in my minds eye. Reply Barbara says: October 7, 2012 at 5:34 pm Tiny birds do seem so fragile when they are up close. I love your use of the word trembling. Very effective. Reply Bruce Ruston says: October 8, 2012 at 2:23 am very nice write Reply Magical Mystical Teacher says: October 8, 2012 at 2:15 pm The bird…the trembling…the uncertainty—you keep me in suspense! Desert Home Reply Aya Wilson says: October 10, 2012 at 10:16 am positive, yes. your line lingers. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.