6 comments on “Fragile

  1. Wonderfully composed haiku (in Kanshicho-style 🙂 ). I like the imagery you have painted here. Thank you for being part in Carpe Diem.

  2. Stephanie says:

    This creates such a clear story in my minds eye.

  3. Barbara says:

    Tiny birds do seem so fragile when they are up close. I love your use of the word trembling. Very effective.

  4. Bruce Ruston says:

    very nice write

  5. The bird…the trembling…the uncertainty—you keep me in suspense!

    Desert Home

  6. Aya Wilson says:

    positive, yes.

    your line lingers.

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