Tea Flowers Dec8 by Mark M. Redfearn petal by petal last night’s tea flowers wilting on my green table Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Charcoal Winter Rain → 7 comments on “Tea Flowers” Chevrefeuille says: December 8, 2012 at 7:12 am ‘Petal by petal’ nice line, very nice and simple as haiku is meant to be. Thank you Mark for sharing. Reply judie says: December 8, 2012 at 7:43 am This is wonderful. I read some of your other haiku poems too. Each one tells an entire story and stirs the imagination in just three lines. I love short poetry, and flash fiction. Nice to meet you. I’m bookmarking! Reply Joanne Moceri-Taveira says: December 8, 2012 at 8:49 am poignant imagery and lovely words Reply Lea says: December 8, 2012 at 9:19 am Yes… your whispers fill my cup… thank you Mark. Reply becca givens says: December 8, 2012 at 9:28 am Very nicely created — I like the imagery of the first two lines … and the ending with green table (which has a layered, multi-meaning effect). Tea Flowers and Tea Blossoms Reply brudberg says: December 8, 2012 at 11:20 am Evidence is that great imagery lies in simplicity Reply yerpirate says: December 10, 2012 at 10:49 pm Real haiku. Simply one of the best read – agree with other comments. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.