9 comments on “Demanding

  1. That would be something … a Mandarin Duck at my breakfast table looking for crumbs. Well … I only get sparrows at my breakfast table … not as colorful as Mandarin Ducks, but really nice birds with their simple colors.
    Thank you for sharing this haiku with us on Carpe diem.

  2. i would happily serve them with crumbs and crack a joke or two…

  3. artmusedog says:

    Imagination plus ~ once again could have many levels of meaning ~

    (A Creative Harbor ~ aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^

  4. Lolly says:

    Yes, definitely doesn’t not seem cobbled as you say it was. Definitely worth reading. A good one!

  5. brudberg says:

    Very good, even a mandarin drake is still a duck demanding breadcrumbs

  6. yerpirate says:

    Yes, agree with Bjorn there – very good, and the beginning of a friendship..or worse…

  7. jrbsays says:

    I love a corn fed duck…but never a demanding one.
    Excellent, thank you for sharing 🙂

  8. becca givens says:

    Interesting take … don’t know a bird that doesn’t like those breadcrumbs! 😀
    Playful Mandarins

  9. very imaginative and well written haiku

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