15 comments on “Last Journey

  1. WabiSabi says:

    I haven’t heard it singing, so I guess I don’t have to go just yet!

  2. kz says:

    when bamboo singing with the wind…i like the image.. ^^

  3. yerpirate says:

    Bamboo singing is nice…so is journey,,,,

  4. Love the hint of pan pipes worlds in this beautiful haiku!

  5. When bamboo is singing than it’s for sure time to pack your things for the last journey. What a wonderfully composed haiku Mark. Thank you.

  6. 4joy says:

    lots of music in a bamboo grove! lovely write

  7. Quite a…prediction you have got going on there. 🙂

  8. Wow, I love the mystics in this one.

  9. Mary says:

    Nicely crafted…..but I am going to hope to avoid the sound of the bamboo singing for a long time to come! (Smiles)

  10. beautiful… I can imagine the song rising, singing farewell… or come near just as clearly.

  11. Sherry Marr says:

    This is beautiful. I adore bamboo. The last journey line really works – I was all “yoiks! Too soon!”

  12. Kim Nelson says:

    Perfect in its concision and imagery. Truth.

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