Complaining

 
 
 


Morning glory,
 
are you still complaining
 
about yesterday’s rain?

14 comments on “Complaining

  1. WabiSabi says:

    Yesterday’s rain brings out today’s flowers!

  2. Is that because they couldn’t come out on a sunless day?

  3. jazzbumpa says:

    Rain drenched flower
    Carrying yesterday’s gloom
    Has a bad hair day

    JzB

  4. Cathy Tenzo says:

    I really love your style!

  5. Green Speck says:

    Ah … this is beautiful !!!

  6. Nice haiku … as the classical masters wrote them. Chapeau.

  7. Ah, we do complain, don’t we? Nice one.

  8. artmusedog says:

    great sense of humor with well penned haiku ^_^

  9. meriak says:

    I think morning glories trumpet their thoughts to anyone who’ll listen, but they’re a little annoying because they’re so clingy.

  10. I am never dissapointed when reading your haiku. They are so condensed an terse and still several layers of thought. This is one of your best IMHO.

  11. rheumatologe says:

    Remember, a morning glory is no Gene Kelly! But your haiku is nicely done! 🙂

  12. Lolly says:

    a morning of truth
    underneath sodden flowers
    those tentacled vines

  13. Sleepshort says:

    Cool haiku this. Thanks for sharing.
    By the way, we haven’t had cause for such complaint for several months now. We’ve spent much of the last two days trying to extract water from a increasingly defiant bore-hole. Such are the contrasts of life uh.

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