Ice Mar4 by Mark M. Redfearn a thin rind of ice veiling the birdbath at dawn three thirsty sparrows Related Post navigation ← Waking Bellsong → 12 comments on “Ice” WabiSabi says: March 4, 2013 at 6:06 pm These thirsty birds made it into my haiku too! ‘rind’ and ‘veiling’ make yours special though! Reply JazzBumpa says: March 4, 2013 at 7:07 pm one brave sparrow gingerly treads the ice veil gets a wet foot Cheers! JzB Reply jrbsays says: March 5, 2013 at 1:19 am love that first line…dare I say it takes the bacon…perhaps not 🙂 Reply magicalmysticalteacher says: March 5, 2013 at 3:54 am Looks like they’ll be thirsting until the sun is warm enough to melt that ice rind! Thin Ice Reply Joanne Moceri-Taveira says: March 5, 2013 at 7:36 am your word choices creates a strong image of these patient, persistent birds… Reply humanTriumphant says: March 5, 2013 at 8:37 am Nice number choice – 3 – for the alliteration Reply Maggie says: March 5, 2013 at 10:03 am “veiling the birdbath”…so lovely. Reply Look for A Lovely Thing says: March 5, 2013 at 10:59 am love this! Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: March 5, 2013 at 11:36 am I love it… and thirsty birds are a good topic. Reply Adriana Dascalu says: March 5, 2013 at 11:58 am truth and beauty in simplity of expression. Reply artmusedog says: March 5, 2013 at 4:07 pm lovely nature haiku ~ very creative ^_^ Reply Leslie says: March 7, 2013 at 12:13 pm ughh birds need to go further south these days for water Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.