12 comments on “Ice

  1. WabiSabi says:

    These thirsty birds made it into my haiku too! ‘rind’ and ‘veiling’ make yours special though!

  2. JazzBumpa says:

    one brave sparrow
    gingerly treads the ice veil
    gets a wet foot


  3. jrbsays says:

    love that first line…dare I say it takes the bacon…perhaps not 🙂

  4. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Looks like they’ll be thirsting until the sun is warm enough to melt that ice rind!

    Thin Ice

  5. your word choices creates a strong image of these patient, persistent birds…

  6. Nice number choice – 3 – for the alliteration

  7. Maggie says:

    “veiling the birdbath”…so lovely.

  8. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    love this!

  9. I love it… and thirsty birds are a good topic.

  10. truth and beauty in simplity of expression.

  11. artmusedog says:

    lovely nature haiku ~ very creative ^_^

  12. Leslie says:

    ughh birds need to go further south these days for water

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