a thin rind of ice
veiling the birdbath at dawn
three thirsty sparrows
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Ice
a thin rind of ice
veiling the birdbath at dawn
three thirsty sparrows
Mark M. Redfearn 
These thirsty birds made it into my haiku too! ‘rind’ and ‘veiling’ make yours special though!
one brave sparrow
gingerly treads the ice veil
gets a wet foot
Cheers!
JzB
love that first line…dare I say it takes the bacon…perhaps not 🙂
Looks like they’ll be thirsting until the sun is warm enough to melt that ice rind!
Thin Ice
your word choices creates a strong image of these patient, persistent birds…
Nice number choice – 3 – for the alliteration
“veiling the birdbath”…so lovely.
love this!
I love it… and thirsty birds are a good topic.
truth and beauty in simplity of expression.
lovely nature haiku ~ very creative ^_^
ughh birds need to go further south these days for water