You’re right: I personally am not that good! Please visit the latest iteration of the haiku and see what you think. I’m still tinkering with it. Thanks!
Hm. You always have me put your words into the translator to check if I understood it right. Most times, I did. Then, you have me lingering on your blog to re-read, re-think and ‘taste’ your haiku. I spend a lot of time on your blog on Fridays. Oh, and I like it!
P.S. I grew up near the sea and was a ‘champion’ in making ánd flying kites… the diamond-shaped ones that is…
all is four square
until it hits the ground
in a wreck tangle
Cheers!
JzB
🙂
Lovely, Mark!
Your words resonate with mathematical and literary symmetry. Delightful!
good lord, you are so good! I mean your haiku writing, not necessarily you, personally…
You’re right: I personally am not that good! Please visit the latest iteration of the haiku and see what you think. I’m still tinkering with it. Thanks!
I was pretty good at plane geometry in high school, but I don’t think I ever saw a plane geometric figure lift off the page!
Kites
Literally, yes…
This is is excellent..
Awesome haiku/senryu
way fun Mark. a cool ku of kite structure. fun. aloha.
I was graded a C in geometry…and only because the teacher liked me…
this kite flies over my head:)
Hm. You always have me put your words into the translator to check if I understood it right. Most times, I did. Then, you have me lingering on your blog to re-read, re-think and ‘taste’ your haiku. I spend a lot of time on your blog on Fridays. Oh, and I like it!
P.S. I grew up near the sea and was a ‘champion’ in making ánd flying kites… the diamond-shaped ones that is…
love Jazzbumpa comment. lol
i find my self in the priti camp!!!
you are clever in haiku and probably geometry too!
Alas, I lost most of my geometry skills years ago… 😦
love ‘off the page’ ~ of your haiku ~ freedom ~ ^_^