9 comments on “Way

  1. ewdupler says:

    Given a few of those that I’ve been on, I would be tempted to change the last line to “a good place to pray!” Great job, I loved the imagery your poem evoked.

  2. Love the imagery and the feeling invoked through your haiku =)

  3. siggiofmaine says:

    I love this…great place to use
    “rickety” and “precipitous in the same
    moment in time.

  4. oneofaclass says:

    My knees are shaking just thinking about it!

  5. Ah, yes. I think you captured the “human journey” perfectly. It’s never a smooth road even if we hold the illusion it is.

  6. WabiSabi says:

    This is a path so familiar to me! Bridge

  7. menons129 says:

    Fine Haiku. Your precipitous journey made me feel that I was crossing a bridge. I had a dizzy feeling.

  8. D says:

    Thank you!!!!

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