Way May13 by Mark M. Redfearn down a gravel road across a rickety bridge precipitous way Related Post navigation ← Bridge Wheel → 9 comments on “Way” ewdupler says: May 14, 2013 at 7:38 pm Given a few of those that I’ve been on, I would be tempted to change the last line to “a good place to pray!” Great job, I loved the imagery your poem evoked. Reply Karin Wiberg says: May 15, 2013 at 3:41 pm LOL. Seriously!! Reply mindlovemisery says: May 14, 2013 at 9:20 pm Love the imagery and the feeling invoked through your haiku =) Reply siggiofmaine says: May 14, 2013 at 10:21 pm I love this…great place to use “rickety” and “precipitous in the same moment in time. Peace Siggi Reply oneofaclass says: May 15, 2013 at 11:36 am My knees are shaking just thinking about it! Reply CuriositytotheMax says: May 15, 2013 at 1:31 pm Ah, yes. I think you captured the “human journey” perfectly. It’s never a smooth road even if we hold the illusion it is. Reply WabiSabi says: May 15, 2013 at 2:09 pm This is a path so familiar to me! Bridge Reply menons129 says: May 16, 2013 at 12:00 am Fine Haiku. Your precipitous journey made me feel that I was crossing a bridge. I had a dizzy feeling. Reply D says: June 11, 2013 at 8:52 pm Thank you!!!! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.