Dancers Aug3 by Mark M. Redfearn three dancers in beer-stained dresses stumbling home Related Post navigation ← Fisherman Chalice → 12 comments on “Dancers” Look for A Lovely Thing says: August 3, 2013 at 3:23 pm Yes! Reply JazzBumpa says: August 3, 2013 at 6:33 pm watching them leave my breath cold on the white foam of another beer JzB Reply flatfroghaiku says: August 4, 2013 at 1:51 am Now that’s an image I can relate to. Basho might have been all for pastoral simplicity but the majority of us live in cities today and working on the images around us is easily the best way to write effective haiku – or senryu in this case. You are the king, Mark! Reply jrbsays says: August 4, 2013 at 4:03 am Oh goodness, I thought I got home without anyone seeing! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 4, 2013 at 4:26 am But you had wicked good fun, didn’t you?;) Reply jrbsays says: August 4, 2013 at 5:00 am Let’s just say that, despite appearances, the night didn’t drag 😉 Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 4, 2013 at 5:35 am You weren’t in drag? 😉 Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: August 4, 2013 at 6:57 am Oh yes… great imagery… I can smell those beerstains Reply magicalmysticalteacher says: August 4, 2013 at 8:07 am Sounds like these dancer got into Kikaku’s spirits! 🙂 Shadowy Night Dance Reply Ese' s Voice says: August 4, 2013 at 10:55 am The night is still young – I wonder how far they will get… 🙂 Reply Maggie Grace says: August 4, 2013 at 3:56 pm Okay. This is hard for me to “like” but I see the fun the rest of you are having with it. Reply Chevrefeuille says: August 4, 2013 at 5:50 pm That’s also a kind of Kagura … but if they will defeat demons with their dance …? I don’t think so. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.