12 comments on “Dancers

  1. JazzBumpa says:

    watching them leave
    my breath cold on the white foam
    of another beer


  2. flatfroghaiku says:

    Now that’s an image I can relate to. Basho might have been all for pastoral simplicity but the majority of us live in cities today and working on the images around us is easily the best way to write effective haiku – or senryu in this case. You are the king, Mark!

  3. jrbsays says:

    Oh goodness, I thought I got home without anyone seeing!

  4. Oh yes… great imagery… I can smell those beerstains

  5. Sounds like these dancer got into Kikaku’s spirits! 🙂

    Shadowy Night Dance

  6. Ese' s Voice says:

    The night is still young – I wonder how far they will get… 🙂

  7. Maggie Grace says:

    Okay. This is hard for me to “like” but I see the fun the rest of you are having with it.

  8. That’s also a kind of Kagura … but if they will defeat demons with their dance …? I don’t think so.

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