8 comments on “Chalice

  1. jrbsays says:

    Chalice, or a holy grail?

  2. There’s something seductive going on here, although I’m not sure who’s doing the seducing: she or the sun.

    Sunset as Paradise

  3. kaykuala says:

    Some anxious moments. She begets sympathy or a reprimand! Nicely Mark!

    Hank

  4. hmm can hear the sizzle – nicely done Mark

  5. Maggie Grace says:

    I thought the chalice added a holiness and beauty. Apparently there were other thoughts… Love your haiku.

  6. Cathy Tenzo says:

    How lovely, filling herself up with the night. I really like this one.

  7. Do I sense a Maria Magdalena fan?

  8. WabiSabi says:

    I really like the idea of a woman as a sacred vessel, regardless of how one interprets this poem. And apparently there are as many interpretations as there are readers!! Bravo!

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