Runaway Aug19 by Mark M. Redfearn thirteen-year-old boarding the Mumbai bus ticket to ride Related Post navigation ← Longing Teacup → 9 comments on “Runaway” Look for A Lovely Thing says: August 19, 2013 at 11:25 am monsoon rain the sudden downpour of a Beatle’s song Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 19, 2013 at 11:35 am Yes, indeed! 😉 Reply 4joy says: August 19, 2013 at 12:06 pm a long strange trip… Reply howanxious says: August 19, 2013 at 5:40 pm a bus to nowhere awakens from a deep sleep boy with a ticket Reply justjoyfulness says: August 19, 2013 at 8:16 pm Reaches there makes a fortune dream city Reply magicalmysticalteacher says: August 20, 2013 at 5:35 am There’s both danger and sadness hinted at in this piece… Pilgrimage to India Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: August 20, 2013 at 11:31 am Oh such sadness for a little boy heading of to the big city… Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 20, 2013 at 12:34 pm Interesting how readers’ and writers’ minds work. I was thinking of 13-year-old girl when I wrote this piece! Reply Maggie Grace says: August 21, 2013 at 4:38 pm Yes, very interesting reading the comments. Wish I were clever enough to ku a reply. Felt light and fun to read. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
monsoon rain
the sudden downpour
of a Beatle’s song
Yes, indeed! 😉
a long strange trip…
a bus to nowhere
awakens from a deep sleep
boy with a ticket
Reaches there
makes a fortune
dream city
There’s both danger and sadness hinted at in this piece…
Pilgrimage to India
Oh such sadness for a little boy heading of to the big city…
Interesting how readers’ and writers’ minds work. I was thinking of 13-year-old girl when I wrote this piece!
Yes, very interesting reading the comments. Wish I were clever enough to ku a reply. Felt light and fun to read.