12 comments on “Swallows

  1. WabiSabi says:

    I have only seen the Great Plains once and there was a storm brewing in the distance. The sky was stunning and your words brought me back to that moment.

  2. Ah! Those fragile swallows caught in a thunderstorm. A very well written haiku inspired on Kikaku’s.

  3. Cathy Tenzo says:

    Reminds me of my time in Minnesota. We’d get vicious thunderstorms which could lead to tornadoes and straight line winds (just as dangerous as tornadoes).

  4. Maggie Grace says:

    Poor swallows. Rainbows must be more fun.

  5. jrbsays says:

    Excellent Mark, I feel for the swallows.

  6. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Swallowed swallows?

    Flights and Gulps of Swallows

  7. 4joy says:

    hope you didn’t mean ‘erase’ in the permanent sense!

  8. Oh, very well written

  9. jazzbumpa says:

    i see we’re on the same wave length today

    yours is more subtle


  10. Wonderful and I can see those swallows

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