Swallows Aug21 by Mark M. Redfearn above the wheat field black thunderclouds erasing a flock of swallows Related Post navigation ← Teacup Spring → 12 comments on “Swallows” WabiSabi says: August 21, 2013 at 2:59 pm I have only seen the Great Plains once and there was a storm brewing in the distance. The sky was stunning and your words brought me back to that moment. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: August 21, 2013 at 3:47 pm Ah! Those fragile swallows caught in a thunderstorm. A very well written haiku inspired on Kikaku’s. Reply Cathy Tenzo says: August 21, 2013 at 5:06 pm Reminds me of my time in Minnesota. We’d get vicious thunderstorms which could lead to tornadoes and straight line winds (just as dangerous as tornadoes). Reply Maggie Grace says: August 21, 2013 at 5:17 pm Poor swallows. Rainbows must be more fun. Reply jrbsays says: August 22, 2013 at 12:45 am Excellent Mark, I feel for the swallows. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 22, 2013 at 2:25 am They were rather swallowed up, weren’t they? 😉 Reply magicalmysticalteacher says: August 22, 2013 at 6:24 am Swallowed swallows? Flights and Gulps of Swallows Reply 4joy says: August 22, 2013 at 6:46 am hope you didn’t mean ‘erase’ in the permanent sense! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: August 22, 2013 at 7:20 am No, just blotted from view! Reply readinpleasure says: August 22, 2013 at 10:11 am Oh, very well written Reply jazzbumpa says: August 22, 2013 at 7:26 pm i see we’re on the same wave length today yours is more subtle Cheers! JzB Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: August 23, 2013 at 10:19 pm Wonderful and I can see those swallows Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.