Shedding

 
 
 


leaf by leaf
 
a willow shedding
 
summer dreams

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11 comments on “Shedding

  1. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    aww, very pretty.

  2. Maggie Grace says:

    You said it more eloquently than I did. Very nice!

  3. WabiSabi says:

    And if only we can learn to let go as easily as the trees do! I love this Mark!

  4. adieu is whispered into the breeze
    Lovely words Mark

  5. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    That’s how many of us fade out too: leaf by leaf, or bit by bit.

    Willow Leaves

  6. jrbsays says:

    I know you won’t follow Cricket, but this feels like Australia’s loss to England. A memory we’re all trying to shed here, but sadly not a dream 🙂

    summer birds have flown

  7. 4joyjoanne says:

    here’s hoping all those summer dreams came true…

  8. What a strong haiku, a classic …

  9. jazzbumpa says:

    as sense of loss
    sober not always
    sad

    Cheers!
    JzB

  10. Oh this was very good… a very good haiku

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