Circles Oct3 by Mark M. Redfearn In vanishing ink she sketches circles of light, while Samson goes blind. Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Cottage God → 23 comments on “Circles” WabiSabi says: October 3, 2013 at 8:29 pm Oh my, there are so many ways to read this. I am too tired to figure it out…. can I come back tomorrow?:) Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 4, 2013 at 2:52 am You’re always welcome here, even if there’s nothing to figure out. Sometimes poetry is simply an enigma to be savored! 😉 Reply Hazel Anastasia says: October 4, 2013 at 8:09 am I’m savoring that enigma! Reply Ramesh Sood says: October 4, 2013 at 4:53 am She sketches circles of light; vanishing ink.. I liked it a lot hence tried to capture the way I saw it… Couldn’t relate to the third line.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/10/her-trembling-handshaiku.html Reply jrbsays says: October 4, 2013 at 5:33 am She…is that Ms de liner? Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 4, 2013 at 6:39 am I would imagine so! Reply artmusedog says: October 4, 2013 at 6:57 am Very contemplative haiku ~ 3rd line has major impact at first ~ Happy Weekend to you ~ ^_^ Reply Joanne Moceri-Taveira says: October 4, 2013 at 7:03 am light and darkness.,,,flows nicely Reply Kim Mailhot says: October 4, 2013 at 7:04 am Thank you for the brain work. It made my mind play…and sketch circle of light. Happy Friday ! Reply somepinkflowers says: October 4, 2013 at 7:16 am lovely & yes this—-> an enigma to be savored … i feel that to be true Here & in my own writings … sometimes the words ~marry*up~ secretly behind their meanings, i do believe Reply readinpleasure says: October 4, 2013 at 7:36 am I’m wondering how Delilah was able to sketch circles of light and not darkness, given her role in Samson’s life. Intriguing haiku, Mark. Reply Laura Hegfield says: October 4, 2013 at 7:53 am fascinating and beautiful way to express this age old tale. Reply Hazel Anastasia says: October 4, 2013 at 8:18 am Delilah. Thy name is …. ________. Anyone, fill the gap? Wait. I’m still looking for the superlike button to click. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 4, 2013 at 8:32 am Sorry, I disabled the “Like” button several weeks ago. Just one of those things… Reply Erin says: October 4, 2013 at 11:35 am So, you disabled the “Like” button? Now I see why I cannot “like” these on FB. I have been trying to figure it out. I do enjoy everything you write, Mark, just so you know. I can’t even figure out how to like them on here, but thought I would let you know that I see them on FB. Sorry I am so computer illiterate :=( Reply gemma says: October 4, 2013 at 9:27 am the sun a circle of light can blind… Reply Chèvrefeuille says: October 4, 2013 at 12:05 pm Beautiful and intriguing … nice take on circle. Reply siggiofmaine says: October 4, 2013 at 11:17 pm WOW…unique take on the prompt…Love it Peace Siggi Reply Andrea thompson says: October 5, 2013 at 11:54 am Oh, to sketch circles of light, sounds heavenly, until the last line, why does there always have to be consequences? Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 5, 2013 at 12:01 pm Well, isn’t that life? 😉 Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: October 6, 2013 at 12:54 pm Delilahtful 🙂 Reply Rebecca Brooks says: October 7, 2013 at 7:07 pm amazing how that can happen in the very same moment. one womans circle is another mans sight. Reply Cathy Tenzo says: October 7, 2013 at 7:36 pm Basking in the enigma 🙂 Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.