12 comments on “Sweeping

  1. Bryan Ens says:

    saltwater – tears?

  2. Quite a change in the image with the last line. Well-crafted.
    -HA

  3. artmusedog says:

    well penned and can smell the salt water ~ rather symbolic too ~ (tears being salty)

  4. Maggie Grace says:

    This really ignites my senses!

  5. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    Maybe she should just put down the broom and let the tears flow freely.

  6. Eyes filled with tears, the day after Valentine.

  7. WabiSabi says:

    For me, living near the water as I do, this suggests a foggy morning, not tears!

  8. I agree with wabi the saltwater wiff can be the sea… maybe the a sailor leaving.

  9. siggiofmaine says:

    Sigh…salty tears ? or wind off the sea ?
    Like this very much.

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