Sweeping Jan19 by Mark M. Redfearn sweeping her bedroom the day after Valentine’s— whiff of saltwater Related Post navigation ← Gnawing Valentine → 12 comments on “Sweeping” Bryan Ens says: January 20, 2014 at 10:23 am saltwater – tears? Reply anmol(alias HA) says: January 20, 2014 at 11:49 am Quite a change in the image with the last line. Well-crafted. -HA Reply artmusedog says: January 20, 2014 at 1:22 pm well penned and can smell the salt water ~ rather symbolic too ~ (tears being salty) Reply Maggie Grace says: January 20, 2014 at 4:11 pm This really ignites my senses! Reply magicalmysticalteacher says: January 21, 2014 at 2:38 am Maybe she should just put down the broom and let the tears flow freely. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: January 21, 2014 at 5:05 am Eyes filled with tears, the day after Valentine. Reply WabiSabi says: January 21, 2014 at 11:11 am For me, living near the water as I do, this suggests a foggy morning, not tears! Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: January 21, 2014 at 11:52 am I agree with wabi the saltwater wiff can be the sea… maybe the a sailor leaving. Reply siggiofmaine says: January 21, 2014 at 10:53 pm Sigh…salty tears ? or wind off the sea ? Like this very much. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: January 22, 2014 at 6:24 am Whichever you choose! 😉 Reply Belinda Broughton says: January 22, 2014 at 3:20 am love the saltwater Reply readinpleasure says: January 22, 2014 at 8:30 am In tears? Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.