Valley

 
 


deep in Adam’s chest
 
the valley of the shadow
 
laying waste his hope

Advertisements

11 comments on “Valley

  1. Nice response on ‘valley’ Mark … and you were the first who submitted a haiku. I had to read it several times, but than … recognition came. Thank you for sharing.

  2. Oh, I like this metapohor…nicely done, Mark.

  3. J says:

    Very nicely done —

  4. This is so beautiful! 🙂

  5. Leonas Lines says:

    Very good one, Mark. Really food for thought…

  6. Alice Keys says:

    Stirring haiku. Good take on “hope”.

  7. SueM says:

    An excellent haiku! It gives me a lot to ponder on.

  8. Rallentanda says:

    Terribly sad. Excellent haiku!

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s

This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.