Valley May22 by Mark M. Redfearn deep in Adam’s chest the valley of the shadow laying waste his hope Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Kerouac Pan → 11 comments on “Valley” Chèvrefeuille says: May 22, 2014 at 4:52 pm Nice response on ‘valley’ Mark … and you were the first who submitted a haiku. I had to read it several times, but than … recognition came. Thank you for sharing. Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: May 23, 2014 at 11:38 pm Clever one Reply Oliana @Tracesofthesoul says: October 28, 2014 at 12:28 am Oh, I like this metapohor…nicely done, Mark. Reply CuriositytotheMax says: October 28, 2014 at 8:48 pm Wow! Reply J says: October 28, 2014 at 10:45 pm Very nicely done — Reply Satya RS (Locomente) says: October 29, 2014 at 5:46 am Different and nice Reply Balqis (@Balqizss) says: October 30, 2014 at 7:50 am This is so beautiful! 🙂 Reply Leonas Lines says: October 30, 2014 at 4:03 pm Very good one, Mark. Really food for thought… Reply Alice Keys says: October 30, 2014 at 6:17 pm Stirring haiku. Good take on “hope”. Reply SueM says: November 1, 2014 at 4:19 am An excellent haiku! It gives me a lot to ponder on. Reply Rallentanda says: November 1, 2014 at 5:30 pm Terribly sad. Excellent haiku! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.