Cargo

 
 


down a mountain path
 
the donkey bears its cargo—
 
departing autumn

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6 comments on “Cargo

  1. artmusedog says:

    Hmm ~ rather contemplative or clear ~ well penned haiku ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  2. Ah that strong donkey … great scene … I hope it’s boss is treating it well … well written Mark.

  3. Suzanne says:

    This is a very visual haiku – I can just see that donkey picking its way down the slope.

  4. julespaige says:

    Your piece evokes the Grand Canyon masterfully carved by time. And the sure footed donkeys used for supplies and tourists.

    Thanks for visiting 🙂

  5. Bryan Ens says:

    Lovely take on the prompt.

  6. ladynimue says:

    nice ! perfect haiku 🙂

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