Cargo Jun30 by Mark M. Redfearn down a mountain path the donkey bears its cargo— departing autumn Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Butterfly Rafters → 6 comments on “Cargo” artmusedog says: June 30, 2014 at 3:17 pm Hmm ~ rather contemplative or clear ~ well penned haiku ~ thanks, ^_^ artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor) Reply Chèvrefeuille says: June 30, 2014 at 4:50 pm Ah that strong donkey … great scene … I hope it’s boss is treating it well … well written Mark. Reply Suzanne says: June 30, 2014 at 10:46 pm This is a very visual haiku – I can just see that donkey picking its way down the slope. Reply julespaige says: July 1, 2014 at 10:22 am Your piece evokes the Grand Canyon masterfully carved by time. And the sure footed donkeys used for supplies and tourists. Thanks for visiting 🙂 Reply Bryan Ens says: July 1, 2014 at 1:59 pm Lovely take on the prompt. Reply ladynimue says: July 5, 2014 at 10:02 am nice ! perfect haiku 🙂 Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.