Donkey

 
 


down a steep decline
 
brown donkey picking her way
 
hoof by unshod hoof

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13 comments on “Donkey

  1. jazzytower says:

    Nice image portrayed here. A sure-footed donkey I bet.

  2. Apurva says:

    interesting use of the word decline! loved the haiku 🙂

  3. oneofaclass says:

    hoof by unshod hoof
    donkey descends steep decline
    it felt so inclined

  4. Monica Lee says:

    I like the imagery that comes from “brown donkey picking her way” –nice!

  5. Oh, I like this one! Such a great image and so skillfully drawn.

  6. Locomente says:

    Imaginative…
    Could envision!!!
    Nice…

  7. I can see the poor donkey!

  8. Leonas Lines says:

    Very nice use of the word “decline” . Am picturing the unshod donkey slowing picking her way.

  9. Amrit Sinha says:

    This is vivid and nicely picturized … loved it 🙂

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