28 comments on “Flash

  1. artmusedog says:

    I like your rendition of nature’s frog in your haiku ~ thanks, ^_^

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  2. judie says:

    Oh my, not familiar with old Basho, but I can see that frog leaping for safety!

  3. Unable to measure it’s depth, pondering over silence of the pond.

  4. It must have been a mighty split 🙂

  5. Gillena Cox says:

    nice; i luv the action in this haiku, highly animated; thanks for stopping over at my blog; have a nice weekend

    much love…

  6. Lea says:

    What a jolt, your haiku!

  7. Nonnie says:

    startling, you bet!

  8. I like your reference to Basho’s famous haiku and the humor in it …

  9. wabi sabi says:

    🙂 I’m smiling in spite of the image I have of the poor zapped frog!

  10. Doh! Spit that frog out!
    Lover the humor here. 🙂

  11. Arushi ahuja says:

    Poor frog… Really funny… Imagining this made me smile….

  12. rebecca says:

    oh my. stunning. i think even Basho is smitten with you!

  13. Poor swallowed frog! I hope it wasn’t the one that lives in my basement.

  14. Rallentanda says:

    Great take on the prompt. Creative and clever !

  15. Oh this is extremely cool! The pond splitting open and swallowing the frog…….wowzers! Loved it.

  16. annieelf2012 says:

    Oh my. This made me laugh out loud.

  17. Mary says:

    Very evocative!

  18. Susan says:

    One who dares to play with Basho! The lightning was bound to hit. Reminds me very irreverently of Peter Paul and Mary’s Old woman who swallowed a frog.

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