Startled

 
 


moon passing quickly
 
over broken oak branches
 
too startled to stop

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7 comments on “Startled

  1. Bastet says:

    Hmm .. the moon as in a crazed driver … interesting image.

  2. cheryl says:

    I can visualize this Mark

  3. Amrit Sinha says:

    No stopping the moon now 🙂

  4. classic ! this is the first word that comes to my mind ,Mark ! you have outdone yourself !

  5. “too startled to stop” – that is the BEST last line ever for this haiku. I agree with Milan “CLASSIC”

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