Surge

 
 


in the beggar’s soup
 
as he drops his wooden spoon
 
violent storm surge

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11 comments on “Surge

  1. Great haiku Mark … I like the humor in this one …

  2. judie says:

    Wow, you can portray a whole theater in one small image. This is great!

  3. janicead says:

    Tempest in a teapot! Fun.

  4. J says:

    now THIS is a creative take on the prompt. very nice!

  5. becca givens says:

    Different direction — great visual imagery — nicely done!!

  6. …the mess after the storm

  7. greenspeckblogger says:

    Loved it … the storm 🙂

  8. julespaige says:

    You made me think of Oliver asking for “More, please” and the tempest that ensued in the emotional sea 🙂

    Humor is a good thing.

  9. menons129 says:

    Beautiful haiku ! Portrayed the agony of the beggar so well..

  10. Oh Mark what a grand chuckle !

  11. Bastet says:

    A fantastic haiku … nice!

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