Surge Oct1 by Mark M. Redfearn in the beggar’s soup as he drops his wooden spoon violent storm surge Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Home Fire → 11 comments on “Surge” Chèvrefeuille says: October 1, 2014 at 11:15 am Great haiku Mark … I like the humor in this one … Reply judie says: October 1, 2014 at 12:54 pm Wow, you can portray a whole theater in one small image. This is great! Reply janicead says: October 1, 2014 at 3:39 pm Tempest in a teapot! Fun. Reply J says: October 1, 2014 at 5:34 pm now THIS is a creative take on the prompt. very nice! Reply becca givens says: October 1, 2014 at 7:48 pm Different direction — great visual imagery — nicely done!! Reply Oliana @Tracesofthesoul says: October 1, 2014 at 8:27 pm …the mess after the storm Reply greenspeckblogger says: October 2, 2014 at 2:51 am Loved it … the storm 🙂 Reply julespaige says: October 2, 2014 at 6:24 am You made me think of Oliver asking for “More, please” and the tempest that ensued in the emotional sea 🙂 Humor is a good thing. Reply menons129 says: October 2, 2014 at 7:48 am Beautiful haiku ! Portrayed the agony of the beggar so well.. Reply moondustwriter says: October 2, 2014 at 1:42 pm Oh Mark what a grand chuckle ! Reply Bastet says: October 4, 2014 at 11:46 pm A fantastic haiku … nice! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.