Smoky

 
 


the last smoky notes
 
fading from her husky voice—
 
blues café at dawn

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16 comments on “Smoky

  1. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    sublime

  2. Wow … a wonderful scene Mark and so in the mood of the blues … I can almost feel that smoky air of a blues cafe …

  3. Excellent Haiku. I loved it.

    Melanie
    bd

  4. Cathy Tenzo says:

    I love this so much!

  5. Maggie Grace says:

    This is so good it took my breath away. Can feel that smoke & environment.

  6. artmusedog says:

    Wonderful Mark ~ definitely can see the smoke and feel the bluesy cafe!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  7. J says:

    ahhhh! the essence of blues! 🙂

  8. janicead says:

    I can smell the cigarette smoke just reading your haiku. Beautiful.

  9. julespaige says:

    Reminds me of the song ‘Lola’
    http://www.kindakinks.net/discography/showsong.php?song=219
    by Ray Davies

    But also I can imagine someone like Ella Fitzgerald.
    Really nice stage scene you’ve set.

  10. Bastet says:

    This is real nice ……… blues!.

  11. Valli says:

    This is lovely haiku!!

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