Drum Oct11 by Mark M. Redfearn a little boy’s drum lying under the plum tree while the petals fall Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Howling Brat → 12 comments on “Drum” J says: October 12, 2014 at 6:57 pm drumming silently, no? Great take on the prompt — Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 12, 2014 at 7:00 pm I envisioned an abandoned drum. You know, the kid got sidetracked, maybe following his dog… On Sun, Oct 12, 2014 at 6:57 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply J says: October 12, 2014 at 8:15 pm Oh, I can see the kid getting sidetracked …. but I was also envisioning the plum petals falling against the abandoned drum … drumming …. but not drumming. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 12, 2014 at 8:18 pm Is there a word for that? Drumming but not drumming? 😉 On Sun, Oct 12, 2014 at 8:15 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply J says: October 12, 2014 at 9:02 pm I have no idea …. was wondering about that! “The sound of silence” perhaps 😉 Christine Goodnough says: October 12, 2014 at 10:03 pm Really like this one. Lost toys tend to be quickly forgotten. Reply Ramesh Sood says: October 13, 2014 at 11:16 am What a beautiful haiku and imagination…Mark.. Loved it.. Do visit me here..please… http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/10/someone-is-happy-haiku.html RS Reply SueM says: October 13, 2014 at 6:53 pm I love the mental picture of this haiku. I wonder if the boy remembers and comes back for it or if he’s like my sons and forgot where he left it? I really enjoyed it! Reply Gillena Cox says: October 14, 2014 at 9:54 am Luv your juxtaposition of rhythm, happening and sensed Much love… Reply jazzytower says: October 15, 2014 at 3:14 pm Love plums. Nice haiku. Reply Bastet says: October 16, 2014 at 8:13 am petals echoing silence the little boy lost his drum Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: October 16, 2014 at 10:13 am Exactly! On Thu, Oct 16, 2014 at 8:13 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.