beggar tips his bowl
last dregs of the Milky Way
spill into the street


25 comments on “Dregs

  1. jhanagan2014 says:

    Wow! You sure are in the stream this week. What a joy.

  2. J says:

    very thoughtful – magical –

  3. janicead says:

    Beautiful imagery.

  4. artmusedog says:

    now there is a visual ~ well penned

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  5. A nice response on Amanogawa …

  6. lynn__ says:

    You captured the reality of a moment…powerfully.

  7. gemma says:

    Fantastic. What an image you’ve put in my mind.

  8. becca givens says:

    Vivid imagery, Mark! Bravo! 😀

  9. ms pie says:

    The stars at my feet here on earth …. I love that !!!

  10. A very strong response.. The beggar works so well in haiku.

  11. jazzytower says:

    Wow! This is nice..graphic.

  12. Bastet says:

    This haiku is fantastic Mark … what fantastic dregs in that bowl!

  13. julespaige says:

    Ah, I see the beggar has just fallen asleep and the sliver reflections of space pool into an alternate universe. 🙂

    • Interesting that you think he fell asleep. I envisioned him purposely dumping the contents of his bowl. If we could ask the beggar, he’d probably give us yet another version of the story!

      On Sun, Oct 19, 2014 at 10:28 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:


  14. Annie says:

    Odd how particular images come together. Yesterday, I read a haiku of a boy, a brown paper bag, and holding a Milky Way. Layers of chocolate and the universe coming together. Serendipity.

  15. What a perfect moment you captured here…love the imagery!!

  16. BEautiful imagery Mark, that is a deep bowl!

  17. Cynthia says:

    So many interpretations of the image you have created. Now that the contents have been poured away, they shall be forever a mystery, I’m thinking.

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