Longing

 
 
 


longing for someone
 
she seasons her potatoes
 
with a thousand tears

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12 comments on “Longing

  1. janicead says:

    Been there, done that.

  2. Well done. Really you produce nice haiku.

  3. definitely feeling lonely now

  4. longing for someone
    she seasons her potatoes
    with a thousand tears
    yams tasting bitter
    milk curdles in her tea

  5. artmusedog says:

    how true ~ well done! ~

    Happy week to you!

    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  6. J says:

    … and they will be bitter to the taste, alone, afterwards …
    nicely done — very powerful.

  7. many layers in this.. but at the core mostly sad.

  8. A sad haiku Jazzy with very strong emotions.

  9. Bastet says:

    Ah Mark … this makes me sigh … those are very salty tatters indeed ….

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