not enough light left
for brushing on rice paper
even one haiku


15 comments on “Departing

  1. Nimi Arora says:

    The desire for just one more…
    I love the last line…

  2. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    so nice 🙂

  3. Beautiful Mark … sometimes i feel that lack of inspiration … but i have enough imagination to try something …

  4. J says:

    This one has a Shiki feel to it – nicely done. 🙂

  5. Bastet says:

    perfect … in the spirit of the true haijin!

  6. The desire remains…wonderful..!

  7. wabi sabi says:

    Very nice! This could be a Japanese death haiku.

  8. Gillena Cox says:

    When writers burn out hits you it’s terrible

    I’m happy you stopped by my blog

    Much love…

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