not enough light left
for brushing on rice paper
even one haiku
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Departing
not enough light left
for brushing on rice paper
even one haiku
Mark M. Redfearn 
Aaah! Nice.
The desire for just one more…
I love the last line…
I can’t imagine not ever writing again…
A Departed Soul
so nice 🙂
Beautiful Mark … sometimes i feel that lack of inspiration … but i have enough imagination to try something …
This one has a Shiki feel to it – nicely done. 🙂
Agree…very shiki !
nice.
Well done!
perfect … in the spirit of the true haijin!
brilliant
The desire remains…wonderful..!
Very nice! This could be a Japanese death haiku.
Yes, I guess it could!
On Thu, Oct 30, 2014 at 4:23 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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When writers burn out hits you it’s terrible
I’m happy you stopped by my blog
Much love…