Fragments Nov4 by Mark M. Redfearn fragments of my dream slipping from the raven’s beak at first light of day Related Post navigation ← Moth Carnations → 18 comments on “Fragments” moondustwriter says: November 4, 2014 at 5:15 pm like the fragmented light Mark Reply J says: November 4, 2014 at 6:29 pm fragments of dreams — more tantalizing than the whole — those moments when we wish either the dawn or the visitor from Porlock had left us alone just just a while longer. This is a wonderful interpretation of the prompt. 🙂 Reply becca givens says: November 4, 2014 at 8:13 pm I like each line, Mark — very nicely crafted! Reply Cheryl-Lynn Roberts says: November 4, 2014 at 8:37 pm slipping from the raven’s beak…wow! Reply Dolores Fegan says: November 5, 2014 at 12:28 am beautifuly written! Reply Bastet says: November 5, 2014 at 1:48 am sound like some of my dreams … 🙂 lovely Mark, I love what you did with such a complicated poem … great synthesis! Reply Hamish 'Managua' Gunn says: November 5, 2014 at 9:59 am woah……….very special – powerful..almost too powerful.. Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: November 5, 2014 at 12:28 pm And there you are including the raven as well… a poem within a poem Reply artmusedog says: November 5, 2014 at 12:37 pm ‘fragments of my dream’ lovely line and so true ~ love the ‘raven’s beak’ ~ Wonderful haiku! Happy Week to you. artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor) Reply Rallentanda says: November 6, 2014 at 5:38 am Mysterious and a tad dark! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: November 6, 2014 at 6:31 am Oh, more than a tad, I’d say! On Thu, Nov 6, 2014 at 6:38 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Chèvrefeuille says: November 6, 2014 at 3:54 pm Beautiful … Reply greenspeckblogger says: November 6, 2014 at 9:05 pm Dreams slipping from raven’s beak … wonderful imagery 🙂 Reply Laura Hegfield says: November 7, 2014 at 8:49 am oh how they do slip away… opening space for new imagining perhaps? Reply gemma says: November 7, 2014 at 8:50 am Odd as this may seem…I once had a similar dream. Reply Lea says: November 7, 2014 at 12:51 pm They just flew over… and I wondered at what I saw… Reply ms pie says: November 7, 2014 at 1:50 pm simplicity of words have a wonderful way of expression Reply rebecca says: November 7, 2014 at 5:49 pm mysterious in all the best ways! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.