18 comments on “Fragments

  1. like the fragmented light Mark

  2. J says:

    fragments of dreams — more tantalizing than the whole — those moments when we wish either the dawn or the visitor from Porlock had left us alone just just a while longer. This is a wonderful interpretation of the prompt. 🙂

  3. becca givens says:

    I like each line, Mark — very nicely crafted!

  4. slipping from the raven’s beak…wow!

  5. Bastet says:

    sound like some of my dreams … 🙂 lovely Mark, I love what you did with such a complicated poem … great synthesis!

  6. woah……….very special – powerful..almost too powerful..

  7. And there you are including the raven as well… a poem within a poem

  8. artmusedog says:

    ‘fragments of my dream’ lovely line and so true ~ love the ‘raven’s beak’ ~ Wonderful haiku!

    Happy Week to you.
    artmusedog and carol (A Creative Harbor)

  9. Rallentanda says:

    Mysterious and a tad dark!

  10. greenspeckblogger says:

    Dreams slipping from raven’s beak … wonderful imagery 🙂

  11. oh how they do slip away… opening space for new imagining perhaps?

  12. gemma says:

    Odd as this may seem…I once had a similar dream.

  13. Lea says:

    They just flew over… and I wondered at what I saw…

  14. ms pie says:

    simplicity of words have a wonderful way of expression

  15. rebecca says:

    mysterious in all the best ways!

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