Dewdrop Nov6 by Mark M. Redfearn one dewdrop shaken from yellow valerian— my cup overflows Related Post navigation ← Carnations Boneset → 12 comments on “Dewdrop” Holistic Wayfarer says: November 6, 2014 at 10:49 am I really like this. Lovely pithy capture, great job with the paradox. Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: November 6, 2014 at 11:58 am For some the cups are small 🙂 Reply Hamish 'Managua' Gunn says: November 6, 2014 at 12:31 pm Excellent – and your haiku are always varied, never similar. Reply Dolores Fegan says: November 6, 2014 at 5:04 pm I just love this one! Reply Bastet says: November 7, 2014 at 6:38 am this is great! complimenti! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: November 7, 2014 at 7:33 am Grazie! On Fri, Nov 7, 2014 at 7:38 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Bastet says: November 7, 2014 at 7:56 am Prego! Reply Sky V says: November 7, 2014 at 7:40 am very nice Reply Rallentanda says: November 7, 2014 at 4:10 pm Blessed relief ! Reply Cathy Tenzo says: November 7, 2014 at 8:39 pm oh, how perfect this is! I am in awe Reply Chèvrefeuille says: November 10, 2014 at 5:20 pm Awesome haiku Mark … could have been written by one of the classic haiku masters. A very strong haiku indeed with a great scene …. thank you for sharing. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: November 10, 2014 at 5:50 pm Thanks, Kristjaan. I appreciate your kind words. On Mon, Nov 10, 2014 at 6:20 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Leave a reply to Holistic Wayfarer Cancel reply Δ This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.
I really like this. Lovely pithy capture, great job with the paradox.
For some the cups are small 🙂
Excellent – and your haiku are always varied, never similar.
I just love this one!
this is great! complimenti!
Grazie!
On Fri, Nov 7, 2014 at 7:38 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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Prego!
very nice
Blessed relief !
oh, how perfect this is! I am in awe
Awesome haiku Mark … could have been written by one of the classic haiku masters. A very strong haiku indeed with a great scene …. thank you for sharing.
Thanks, Kristjaan. I appreciate your kind words.
On Mon, Nov 10, 2014 at 6:20 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote:
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