season’s first snowfall
crows plowing their way homeward
seven forests north


13 comments on “Homeward

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    luv the imaging of distance in Line3

    much love…

  2. so the crows are coming here?

  3. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    seven forests north. A lovely phrase. An exacting phrase. love this haiku.

  4. J says:

    so much to love here — plowing homeward, seven forests north — very nicely done 🙂

  5. janicead says:

    love the seven forests north, thinking like a crow!

  6. becca givens says:

    enjoyed your direction of autumn changes into winter

  7. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    I’ve heard that crows are smart, but smart enough to count forests? 😉

    Inspired by Richard Wright

  8. Blake says:

    I really like the precision of “seven forests north” – it places the reader at the scene, besides being a wonderful phrase.

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