For this slow spring rain
I have dreamed all winter long
in broken English.


10 comments on “Rain

  1. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    Ah YES! Love the final line. So unexpected and awesome.

  2. julespaige says:

    I think that might be how (especially how) my one grandmother dreamed.
    Especially when in her later years she forgot much of the English she had learned.
    I really like this verse.

    Thanks for your visit.

    All the best this Holly Daze season to you and yours.
    Have a most wonderful and blessed New Year!

  3. Rallentanda says:

    Really! I thought you might be Japanese ! 🙂
    Best wishes for a Merry Christmas !

  4. This is a great haiku! 🙂

  5. Cheryl-Lynn says:

    Loved that last line…here in Quebec so many speak like that 😀

  6. That last line is amazing… 🙂

  7. Yes the last line.. and it evokes that song by Marianne Faithful..

  8. siggiofmaine says:

    Excellent response to the prompt… I smiled at my reading of it…thank you.

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