Rain Dec15 by Mark M. Redfearn For this slow spring rain I have dreamed all winter long in broken English. Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Rooster Piano → 10 comments on “Rain” Look for A Lovely Thing says: December 15, 2014 at 7:56 pm Ah YES! Love the final line. So unexpected and awesome. Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: December 16, 2014 at 1:54 am Thanks! I’m glad you were a bit startled. (So was I when I wrote it.) Reply julespaige says: December 16, 2014 at 5:31 am I think that might be how (especially how) my one grandmother dreamed. Especially when in her later years she forgot much of the English she had learned. I really like this verse. Thanks for your visit. All the best this Holly Daze season to you and yours. Have a most wonderful and blessed New Year! Reply Rallentanda says: December 16, 2014 at 5:51 am Really! I thought you might be Japanese ! 🙂 Best wishes for a Merry Christmas ! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: December 16, 2014 at 6:24 am Oh, you! 😉 On Tue, Dec 16, 2014 at 6:51 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > > Reply B i r g i t t a says: December 16, 2014 at 7:16 am This is a great haiku! 🙂 Reply Cheryl-Lynn says: December 16, 2014 at 9:33 am Loved that last line…here in Quebec so many speak like that 😀 Reply anmol(alias HA) says: December 16, 2014 at 10:00 am That last line is amazing… 🙂 Reply Björn Rudberg (brudberg) says: December 16, 2014 at 11:34 am Yes the last line.. and it evokes that song by Marianne Faithful.. Reply siggiofmaine says: December 17, 2014 at 11:55 pm Excellent response to the prompt… I smiled at my reading of it…thank you. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.