For this slow spring rain
I have dreamed all winter long
in broken English.
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Rain
For this slow spring rain
I have dreamed all winter long
in broken English.
Mark M. Redfearn 
Ah YES! Love the final line. So unexpected and awesome.
Thanks! I’m glad you were a bit startled. (So was I when I wrote it.)
I think that might be how (especially how) my one grandmother dreamed.
Especially when in her later years she forgot much of the English she had learned.
I really like this verse.
Thanks for your visit.
All the best this Holly Daze season to you and yours.
Have a most wonderful and blessed New Year!
Really! I thought you might be Japanese ! 🙂
Best wishes for a Merry Christmas !
Oh, you! 😉
On Tue, Dec 16, 2014 at 6:51 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > >
This is a great haiku! 🙂
Loved that last line…here in Quebec so many speak like that 😀
That last line is amazing… 🙂
Yes the last line.. and it evokes that song by Marianne Faithful..
Excellent response to the prompt… I smiled at my reading of it…thank you.