on a windy night
slipping into bed with me
the sounds of silence


14 comments on “Windy

  1. Jen says:

    As long as it’s not “a vision softly creeping”. They leave their seeds everywhere. o.O
    Just kidding ūüėČ

    An interesting weave, here, with the wind and the silence. Nicely done!

  2. When you are about to sleep that’s the sound you want.

  3. jhanagan2014 says:

    It is magical, isn’t it, how the wind in the eaves quiets the mind? Nice catch.

  4. there is a comfort in those sounds

  5. WOW! This is really a haiku as it is meant to be in my opinion, could have been written by one of the classics.

  6. jazzbumpa says:

    excellent surprise ending
    mysterious too
    quite a little gem


  7. menons129 says:

    Mark, A nice take on the prompt!

  8. Aha – the master has spoken, again! Well done

  9. Leaves room for speculation. Love it!

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