Slums

 
 
 


finding my lost son
 
under a blue sombrero
 
in Tijuana’s slums

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13 comments on “Slums

  1. artmusedog says:

    ooh I can see that blue sombrero ~ lovely penned haiku ~

    Happy weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  2. rebecca says:

    a father and son
    the sweetness of reunion
    turns the sky true blue

  3. Lea says:

    To find what has been lost is indeed a treasure.

  4. judie says:

    Hope he wanted to be found. That makes it really nice.

  5. Annie says:

    I visited Tijuana often in the early 70’s. Your haiku brought that time period to vivid life.

  6. gemma says:

    That he was found gives us hope.

  7. Extraordinary haiku. Opens up a myriad of stories

  8. jazzbumpa says:

    wow

    namaste
    jzb

  9. Great response on our “play-again” prompt Mark. I hope this haiku isn’t based on reality, was your son really lost?

  10. Wonderfully written haiku!

  11. Rallentanda says:

    Liked the mood of this…disturbing but real !

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