remembering stone
even the odd striations
whittled by the wind


14 comments on “Whittled

  1. janicead says:

    interesting take. well done

  2. Gillena Cox says:

    really nice response, luv the way time is working through this haiku

    much love…

  3. jazzbumpa says:

    this gives me such a vivid image
    i might have had this stone once
    i don’t remember losing it


  4. Nicely summed up by Gillena

  5. Nonnie USA says:

    great visualization! I normally need a visual cue to write whereas you seem to have images stored in your brain.

  6. Suzanne says:

    Striations in stone like tree rings marking the passage of time.

  7. Bastet says:

    Cool … and by water and snow as well … 😉

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