cold autumn drizzle
drenching every street corner—
the lamps gutter out


26 comments on “Drizzle

  1. judie says:

    Love this! I can picture it, embrace it. My kind of day.

  2. Lovely! I love autumn.

  3. I miss the colors of autumn, the rain that makes everything shine, despite the lamps that go out.

  4. jazzbumpa says:




  5. girl friday says:

    love the verb ‘gutter’ here. Also in my cheeks are guttered with tears

  6. artmusedog says:

    Love the ‘autumn drizzle’ ~ better than SNOW!

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  7. jazzytower says:

    With the day we are having here I long for spring with the promise of summer:) I still like the haiku though.

  8. Nonnie USA says:

    winter today has bleak skies here- blah!

  9. gemma says:

    LOVE autumn, but first it’s summer sizzle….

  10. janicead says:

    So much to love in these few words!

  11. Look for A Lovely Thing says:

    Nice and atmospheric.

  12. Gillena Cox says:

    happy Valentines 2015

    much love…

  13. Suzanne says:

    Sounds chilly – I can almost feel the damp of that rain

  14. Great sense of noir! Very vivid.

  15. Lea says:

    That was us a week ago, more buckets that drizzle! What really caught me was your comment of “When earth stands hard as iron, water like a stone‚Ķ” Love this!

  16. rebecca says:

    maybe if we keep writing about rain-it will come!

  17. Nonnie USA says:

    I hate when that happens!

  18. Ah a good old autumn day with heavy rainfall awesome

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