Nibble

 
 
 


mouse in the orchard
 
one nibble then another
 
till the last plum’s gone

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16 comments on “Nibble

  1. rebecca says:

    one contented mouse
    dreams bathed in purple flowers
    holds the seeds for spring

  2. judie says:

    No worries. There will be more plums, Mr. Mouse.

  3. gemma says:

    Shhh. Little mouse sleeping.

  4. Cathy says:

    Oh, to have a fresh plum on which to nibble. Thank you!!

  5. Lea says:

    I have the plum trees… and I have rats, not mice… nibble is a loaded word for me today. I am happy to keep the mice inside your haiku Mark!

  6. artmusedog says:

    smart mouse and delightful haiku

    Happy Weekend,
    artmusedog and carol

  7. Cheryl-Lynn says:

    Oh those darn rodents!

  8. Jen says:

    Oh, but surely there’s enough fruit fall to feed a starving mousie, right? 😉

  9. Bastet says:

    Ah … what a mouse! We have lots of plum orchards here in my area … I wonder if we have a few Mighty Mice like that too! 🙂

  10. the logic of your haiku is very funny.

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