Dust

 
 
 


unfinished haiku
 
gathering dust on my desk
 
now that the light’s out

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21 comments on “Dust

  1. Cathy Tenzo says:

    tragic (and well done)

  2. clever – hope it shakes the dust off for another day 🙂

  3. jazzbumpa says:

    finish that haiku
    you’ll find that all it takes is
    a bright idea

    cheers
    jzb

  4. Jen says:

    Always one poem that refuses to be wrangled. 😉

  5. the dust is the last line…

  6. The light, the light! Let there be light! 🙂

  7. Bastet says:

    the sun finally rising
    wakes up his inspiration

    shaking off the dust
    today’s haiku now begins
    a hot cup of tea

  8. Gillena Cox says:

    oh i luv it (◕‿◕。)

    much love…

  9. I hate when that happens and it’s not true what mama said that the words will come in the morning…but don’t throw out that paper!

  10. It produces a picture in my mind..the haiku is sad and waiting to be finished 😀 nicely done…

  11. mira65 says:

    Lovely haiku..

  12. janicead says:

    They do not gather dust in a computer ; ) Made me smile.

  13. A new day will come and bring you new light … maybe it will help you to finish your unfinished haiku

  14. wingedwind says:

    a really nice haiku!

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