Raindrops Mar7 by Mark M. Redfearn three raindrops—count them!— just enough to tantalize my wilting squash vines Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Funeral Quotes → 11 comments on “Raindrops” Tournesol (Clr) says: March 7, 2015 at 8:33 am Just shows how naure is not greedy like humans Reply artmusedog says: March 7, 2015 at 3:37 pm Very witty and fun haiku! Happy Weekend to you, artmusedog and carol Reply adaspoetryalcove says: March 7, 2015 at 6:38 pm Time to get out the garden hose. Reply Jen says: March 7, 2015 at 7:01 pm Oh, Mark! This made me remember the family garden when I was a kid — waiting for a much-anticipated rain – sometimes a rain that never arrived!!! It seemed so cruel. That first line — I could *HEAR* that indignation!!! [“Count them!”] Anyway. This turned into a ramble. Loved the haiku — 😀 Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: March 7, 2015 at 7:13 pm A handful of words stirred up all that passion in you? Wow! Thanks! On Sat, Mar 7, 2015 at 8:01 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Jen says: March 7, 2015 at 7:33 pm 😀 Very welcome 🙂 Reply Bastet says: March 7, 2015 at 11:35 pm ah just three drops of rain … anyone whose ever been totally dependant on rain fall … that sometimes never comes can feel the longing in these first words of your haiku … very powerful! Reply Gemma Wiseman says: March 8, 2015 at 1:29 am How dry areas connect with those 3 raindrops and know what a serious treasure they can be. Reply jazzytower says: March 8, 2015 at 6:36 am A potent handful of words they were:) it’s always interesting how memories get triggered:) Reply georgeplace2013 says: March 8, 2015 at 5:56 pm Nature can be a tease. Reply janicead says: March 8, 2015 at 10:14 pm wilted leaves in noonday’s heat crave moisture of evening’s dew Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.