Brushing

 
 
 


brushing the dirt
 
from Grandmother’s gravestone
 
to touch her name

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11 comments on “Brushing

  1. Jen says:

    Oh Mark. I felt this one deeply —
    A great response. Well done indeed —

  2. This truly moved me to tears, Mark…beautiful!

  3. jazzytower says:

    Keeping that connection. Wonderful..

  4. This one hits me deep … it brought sad (and happy) memories back in mind … very nicely written.

  5. judie says:

    Awesome! Just awesome imagery it brings! The thoughts go on and on.

  6. Poignant, very moving.

  7. artmusedog says:

    What a loving and heart warming haiku ~

    Happy Weekend to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  8. gemma says:

    When you aren’t there to touch her name, may a soft wind blow the dirt away to reveal it.

  9. Lea says:

    Poignantly beautiful… love this very much…

  10. Lenora says:

    I love this! the visual is poignant and so emotional.. blessings

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