Sweeping

 
 
 


in the ceaseless sound
 
of wind sweeping the prairie
 
a terrified mouse

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13 comments on “Sweeping

  1. Gillena Cox says:

    nice juxtaposition Mark, luv it

    much love…

  2. Cathy Tenzo says:

    very nice and poor little mouse

  3. This is such a stellar response Mark.. That little mouse create just the right sharpness.

  4. This is great – I can really hear that powerful wind but I do feel for the poor mouse!

  5. Jen says:

    Awesome response! Poor sleekit tim’rous cowerin’ thing!

  6. I really like this one!

  7. I love that juxtaposition Mark … an awesome haiku with a wonderful scene so natural.

  8. Not only the juxtaposition but the image is so vivid we want to scream “hide” to the wee mouse:)

  9. magicalmysticalteacher says:

    The wind sweeps across the desert too, and sometimes I just wish it would stop!

    Magical Key

  10. lynn__ says:

    In Iowa, I think mice are accustomed to wind but terrified by sound of tractors pulling balers!

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