Breath

 
 
 


in the same small room
 
where her lover lies dying—
 
breath of the raven

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9 comments on “Breath

  1. This was a sad and tragic one Mark …. unless the are both dying.

  2. artmusedog says:

    Symbology of the Raven ~ of death is a bad rap ~ but lovely haiku ~

    Happy Weekend coming to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  3. So beautiful but sad…being at peace with oneself and privileged to be with a loved one is a blessing too.

  4. Jen says:

    Oof…. I am speechless, Mark — !!!

  5. janicead says:

    Very well done, Mark.

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