Breath Apr15 by Mark M. Redfearn in the same small room where her lover lies dying— breath of the raven Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Teacup Wisdom → 9 comments on “Breath” B i r g i t t a says: April 15, 2015 at 2:54 pm This was a sad and tragic one Mark …. unless the are both dying. Reply artmusedog says: April 15, 2015 at 4:35 pm Symbology of the Raven ~ of death is a bad rap ~ but lovely haiku ~ Happy Weekend coming to you, artmusedog and carol Reply adaspoetryalcove says: April 15, 2015 at 7:14 pm Nicely done! Reply Tracesofthesoul says: April 15, 2015 at 7:47 pm So beautiful but sad…being at peace with oneself and privileged to be with a loved one is a blessing too. Reply Jen says: April 15, 2015 at 11:32 pm Oof…. I am speechless, Mark — !!! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: April 16, 2015 at 3:29 am But you managed to eke out a mini-comment! 😉 On Wed, Apr 15, 2015 at 11:32 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Jen says: April 16, 2015 at 10:24 am True — a teeny one 😉 Reply janicead says: April 16, 2015 at 11:29 am Very well done, Mark. Reply Chèvrefeuille says: April 20, 2015 at 10:05 am Well written Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.