Aftermath

 
 
 


After last night’s storm,
 
even the white pear blossoms
 
bear a crimson stain.

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17 comments on “Aftermath

  1. Lea says:

    Such power in this haiku, raw and intense, these words bear witness…

  2. gemma says:

    This paints a beautiful picture in my mind. Thank you.

  3. strong emotion in three short lines… beautiful Mark.

  4. gillena says:

    Ah the detailing in this haiku is awesome

    Much love…

  5. Suzanne says:

    powerful haiku – it sounds like the kind of storms we are having down here at the moment.

  6. Jen says:

    Very nicely done — this one speaks to me.

  7. joanna says:

    Ouch!
    Nice one.

  8. Oliana says:

    This resonates…very powerful, Mark.

  9. Cathy Tenzo says:

    dark and intriguing

  10. vyomimalik says:

    My! Powerful! Loved it!

  11. judie says:

    And the blossom cries with the rest of the tossed.

  12. artmusedog says:

    powerful nature haiku ~ lovely!

    Happy Week to you,
    artmusedog and carol

  13. Even the pear has to let go … and maybe it also will look like the snow … nice haiku Mark.

  14. janicead says:

    Such an amazingly descriptive verse!

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