Riverbed May17 by Mark M. Redfearn For a while the stone resting in the riverbed holds the evening light. Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Sowing Forgetting → 14 comments on “Riverbed” adaspoetryalcove says: May 17, 2015 at 6:47 pm Beautiful! Reply janicead says: May 17, 2015 at 8:00 pm Took my breath, Mark. Reply Jen says: May 17, 2015 at 8:05 pm A perfect moment – and your haiku has a great classical feel, too. Very nicely done 🙂 Reply Forest Tinker says: May 17, 2015 at 10:40 pm Superb. Again, at your best Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: May 18, 2015 at 2:19 am Thanks. I worked on this all day, and still wasn’t satisfied when I published it, but I just couldn’t do any more with it. Your affirmative comment and others make me realize once again that (to paraphrase someone else—Abraham Lincoln, I think) a writer who has himself as an editor (or critic) has a fool for a client! 😉 On Sun, May 17, 2015 at 10:40 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Suzanne says: May 17, 2015 at 11:08 pm Gosh! That’s quite wonderful. Reply Mon says: May 18, 2015 at 12:04 am *_* WWWOOOOWWWWW Reply Nonnie says: May 18, 2015 at 9:30 am I want to be there to experience that lovely image! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: May 19, 2015 at 2:56 am Let your imagination take you to the spot! 😉 On Mon, May 18, 2015 at 9:30 AM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Tournesol (Clr) says: May 18, 2015 at 6:54 pm This is truly beautiful and worth all the time you put into this perfect classical haiku, Mark!! bravo!! Reply Mark M. Redfearn says: May 19, 2015 at 2:57 am Well, I don’t know about “perfect,” but I do appreciate your kind words Cheryl-Lynn. On Mon, May 18, 2015 at 6:54 PM, Mark M. Redfearn wrote: > Reply Greg says: May 19, 2015 at 5:46 am Simply serene. Reply Bastet says: May 19, 2015 at 10:02 am This is simply lovely … I love the vision that popped in my mind when I read it. Reply judie says: May 21, 2015 at 5:43 am Absolutely awesome! My mind’s eye is there. About your dissatisfaction…SARK said “when writing, ignore the inner critic shouting about content, form, and grammar”. You have obviously accomplished this because you always give us just what you see. Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.