Weeds May20 by Mark M. Redfearn Part of a rice field keeps appearing in her dreams, the part choked with weeds. Advertisements Related Post navigation ← Woodpeckers Frost → 11 comments on “Weeds” adaspoetryalcove says: May 20, 2015 at 10:24 am Very Intriguing! :0) Reply Suzanne says: May 20, 2015 at 4:04 pm How strange. Your haiku has set me wondering. Reply Tessa says: May 20, 2015 at 7:27 pm Nice Haiku! Reply Jen says: May 20, 2015 at 8:34 pm Hopefully this isn’t a duplicate comment – if so, please delete. This is very mysterious – deceptively simple. Nicely done! Reply Bastet says: May 20, 2015 at 10:52 pm Oh … now this is very deep …. almost Freudian … I like it very much. Reply ladyleemanila says: May 21, 2015 at 8:38 am enchanting haiku 🙂 Reply Greg says: May 21, 2015 at 9:44 am I live the simplicity and yet the mystery, too! Reply kalpana solsi says: May 21, 2015 at 11:22 pm A strange dream maybe of unfulfilled aspirations. A lovely haiku. Reply Greg says: May 22, 2015 at 7:08 am Great imagery that leaves a lot to the reader’s interpretation! Reply kaykuala h says: May 22, 2015 at 4:11 pm Obviously the sub-conscious is reminding her of something she intended doing! Hank Reply Amrit Sinha says: June 1, 2015 at 5:11 am I wonder her reaction when she woke up! Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. This site uses Akismet to reduce spam. Learn how your comment data is processed.