Part of a rice field
keeps appearing in her dreams,
the part choked with weeds.


11 comments on “Weeds

  1. Suzanne says:

    How strange. Your haiku has set me wondering.

  2. Jen says:

    Hopefully this isn’t a duplicate comment – if so, please delete. This is very mysterious – deceptively simple. Nicely done!

  3. Bastet says:

    Oh … now this is very deep …. almost Freudian … I like it very much.

  4. enchanting haiku 🙂

  5. Greg says:

    I live the simplicity and yet the mystery, too!

  6. kalpana solsi says:

    A strange dream maybe of unfulfilled aspirations. A lovely haiku.

  7. Greg says:

    Great imagery that leaves a lot to the reader’s interpretation!

  8. kaykuala h says:

    Obviously the sub-conscious is reminding her of something she intended doing!


  9. Amrit Sinha says:

    I wonder her reaction when she woke up!

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